Sunday 3 June 2012

Working on Writing - Publishing Choice Writing


Everybody is making a story. – Stacy
The writing is called publish your choice writing.  It was fun to publish a story!  -Sofia
In our writer`s notebook we are doing something where you draw a circle (brainstorm) and think about what you will write about. –Tashina
In writer’s workshop we are publishing our choice writing! My piece is about……….Me!! I can’t wait till we get to edit! –Jess
In writer’s notebook Ronelle, Sam, Katie and Lauren are doing persuasive writing.  Ronelle is pools vs lakes; Lauren is ringette vs hockey; Sam is sketching vs carbons; Katie is bikes vs cars!  Writing is so much fun! –Ronelle
Everybody is making a story. –Aden
In writer’s notebook there is one group that is practicing persuasive writing because that is their goal. Me, Ronelle, Katie and Sam are doing persuasive writing, my topics are ringette over hockey. –Lauren
In writing we have this new system where if you don’t know how to spell a word then you put a ----- there and if you have an interesting word that you can find a better word for you put a ~~~~~~~~~. –Ally
In our writer`s notebooks some of us are doing persuasive writing.  Which wants someone to pick something over another. –Katie
In writer’s notebook my story is about gummy worm gummy bears. –Eric C
In writer’s notebook we are making a book.  Mine is called the Talking Juice Box it is pretty fun. –Maddox
We made up titles and mine was called the secret garden. When we use the wrong spelling we underline it with a line.  When we do wow words we do a squiggly line. –Heidi
In writer’s notebook, we are working on a story and if you think you spelt something wrong, you use a straight line underneath.  If you write a word you think you could use a better word for, you use a squiggly line. –Derek
Right now in work on writing we are doing choice writing and working on our goals. My story is about a crazy vacation. –Frances
We are making stories in our writer’s notebook. –Eric D
For writer’s notebooks we are working on title, spelling and wow words.  We are doing a story, mine is about camp. –Stacy
In my writer’s notebook I am working on persuasive writing.  My title is sketching over cartoons. –Sam
In our writers notebook we are writing a story about one topic.  It is kind of like  T.W.A.S. because you have to focus on one topic. –Cecilia
In writing I worked on my story named Mine Craft. –Khang
My story is called Renegades.  I have not started it yet. –Kaelan
My story is about Mine Craft.  Khang, Eric D, Derek and me play mine craft. –Ethan
Food fight is about a war between health and junk food but that’s only one story. –Mitchell
For writer`s notebook we are making our own stories. –Dante

9 comments:

  1. I can't wait until we are done!!!!!
    Frances

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  2. I can't wait until we can present our stories and pictures !!!
    Frances

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  3. It was a very fun year and I am VERY sad its over. Hope to see you all next year!!

    Very fun writers workshop activity!!

    The GAL that EVERYBODY knows.............- Allsters or Aligator or just Ally!!

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  4. Thanks mrs. kosolowski and the grade 3/4 class of 2011-2012 !!! It was a great year !!!
    Frances

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  5. I will miss you all!!
    frances

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  6. I miss my old classroom �� Frances

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    1. MEEEEEE Toooooo!!!!!!

      MRS. k i miss the old classroom i will blog all the time :)

      Ally

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  7. hi its ronelle i miss grade four can i go back to it it was so much fun!!!!:)

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  8. hi mrs k khang

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